From 2a43b41177cd039233a74ce01876fec45c1b742b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: dan2468 <dantesoft@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 9 May 2020 11:41:05 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Update README.md

added project description; added Run and Release sections; added link to Google Play Console;
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 README.md | 31 ++++++++++++++++++++++++-------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index e10a6604..0450c870 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -1,4 +1,18 @@
-## comma Connect - React Native App
+## comma connect
+
+This is a React Native App to connect your phone to your vehicles equipped with [comma two](https://comma.ai/shop/products/comma-two-devkit) or [EON](https://comma.ai/shop/products/eon-gold-dashcam-devkit).
+
+Pair your `comma two` for:
+
+- Real-time vehicle location on the map
+- Live snapshot from device cameras
+- Drive videos replay with GPS path
+- 24/7 device connectivity when subscribed to `comma prime` (free 3-month trial, can be activated without the data plan if you have a third-party SIM)
+
+Live location available for devices connected to internet with software version 0.5.10 or newer.
+Snapshots available for devices with software version 0.7 or newer.
+
+See also: [Frequently Asked Questions](https://comma.ai/faq)
 
 ### Install
 - `git clone https://github.com/commaai/connect.git`
@@ -6,6 +20,8 @@
 - `bundle install`
 - `yarn`
 
+### Run
+
 #### Run iOS Debug (Simulator)
 - `cd ios && bundle install && pod install`
 - `cd ..`
@@ -14,18 +30,19 @@
 #### Run Android Debug (Device/Simulator)
 - `yarn android`
 
-#### Release Android beta
+### Release
+
+#### Android beta release
 - `KEYSTORE_PASSWORD=*** bundle exec fastlane android internal_beta`
-- visit play store releases dashboard to finalize release (only if gradle versionName changes)
+- visit [Play Store releases dashboard](https://play.google.com/apps/publish/) to finalize release (only if gradle versionName changes)
 
-#### Release iOS beta
+#### iOS beta release
 - `bundle exec fastlane ios beta`
 
 #### Android production release
 - `KEYSTORE_PASSWORD=*** bundle exec fastlane android production`
-- visit play store releases dashboard to finalize release
+- visit [Play Store releases dashboard](https://play.google.com/apps/publish/) to finalize release
 
 #### iOS production release
 - `bundle exec fastlane ios production`
-- visit https://appstoreconnect.apple.com/ to finalize release
-
+- visit [App Store Connect](https://appstoreconnect.apple.com/) to finalize release

From 8421da0174f9d1b717f22f89d9cd4cf6c2f193a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: dan2468 <dantesoft@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 9 May 2020 13:00:41 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Update README.md

rephrased features
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 README.md | 9 +++------
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 0450c870..af4c8369 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -4,14 +4,11 @@ This is a React Native App to connect your phone to your vehicles equipped with
 
 Pair your `comma two` for:
 
-- Real-time vehicle location on the map
-- Live snapshot from device cameras
-- Drive videos replay with GPS path
+- Real-time vehicle location on the map (for devices connected to Internet, with software version 0.5.10 or newer)
+- Live snapshot from device cameras (for devices connected to Internet, with software version 0.7 or newer)
+- Drive videos replay with GPS path (also available [on the website and offline](https://github.com/commaai/openpilot/tree/master/tools#replay-driving-data))
 - 24/7 device connectivity when subscribed to `comma prime` (free 3-month trial, can be activated without the data plan if you have a third-party SIM)
 
-Live location available for devices connected to internet with software version 0.5.10 or newer.
-Snapshots available for devices with software version 0.7 or newer.
-
 See also: [Frequently Asked Questions](https://comma.ai/faq)
 
 ### Install

From 4a7297e12f9e2706570c9d8b5704445af7259b73 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: dan2468 <dantesoft@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 9 May 2020 13:06:50 +0300
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Update README.md

moved instructions to be in the same platform order
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 README.md | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index af4c8369..d4a8dc58 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ See also: [Frequently Asked Questions](https://comma.ai/faq)
 
 ### Run
 
+#### Run Android Debug (Device/Simulator)
+- `yarn android`
+
 #### Run iOS Debug (Simulator)
 - `cd ios && bundle install && pod install`
 - `cd ..`
 - `yarn ios`
 
-#### Run Android Debug (Device/Simulator)
-- `yarn android`
-
 ### Release
 
 #### Android beta release